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I’m too young to be so empty
Too young to be so cold
Too young to be so beautiful
Yet feel so very old

It’s like these sixteen years
Have all been spent in vain
Like every single happiness
Falls from my eyes like rain

I’m too young to be so sad inside
Too young for all these cares
Too young for every burden
That I inadvertently ensnare

I feel the world on my shoulders
That I’m crying everyone’s tears
That every single person
Gives me all their childish fears

I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain

It’s like he has my heart
Sitting in his palms
He doesn’t do his part
To keep me still and calm

I’m too young for feeling sorry
So sorry for my pain
And much too young for writing poetry
That always stays the same
©2006-2009 ~bournlippy
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OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I definately will have to agree that we are too young to have to deal with all this shit we are dealing with and that we shouldn't be writing this kind of poetry when we still have so much life left to live. But oh wells, shit happens and life sucks. We'll move on eventually and if not then we'll go insane. Such is life. At least there will be this poetry to remember us by right?

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Smile as my heart breaks
And bleeds on to my soul
Laugh to mask my dead eyes,
They stare from my drowned soul
wow, your talents shining through in this one. i love it when a writer is able to write about something they understand and the readers are able to relate to it too. i love the last line, kudos

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~here when i get the urge~
*blushes insanely* I'm glad you like it so much!! Thanks for the comment .. It means a lot to me. I hope peoples final memory isn't a sad one. But that's a long ways away lol Thanks so much again!!

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
Yay.. You rarely comment on any of my stuff.. This makes me happy.. A little happier then I was when i wrote the poem anyways lol Many thanks!!

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
i really like this...

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Life Is Not a Problem to Be Solved; It's an Adventure to be Lived!
Thanks I'm glad you like!

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
Oh wow love it..
*adding it to :+fav: *

I just love it *reads again*

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Nothing is impossible, the impossible just take longer time
Here is my :gallery: [link]
haha yay.. thanks!

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
yw :hug:

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Nothing is impossible, the impossible just take longer time
Here is my :gallery: [link]

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