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I wish I was the one that broke your heart
The one you loved from the very start
The one you knew you’d do anything for
The one that made you want more and more

I wish I was the one that made you hurt
From your head to the cold hard earth
The one that made your heart throb
A pain that you could not discard

I wish I was the one you couldn’t deny
The only one that could make you cry
The one you took back every time
For fear your heart would stop and die

I wish I was the one you think of often
Your secret wish to not be forgotten
I wish I was the one you begged to be free
Because this is what you do to me
©2006-2009 ~bournlippy
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It's easier for me to think that he'd break if he felt what he was doing to me.
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wow this is nice, everyone feels like that at one point in time
you did a great job conveying the feelings, its very professional unlike alot of the poetry on da
i like it alot
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fate is an elegant cold hearted whore, she loves salting my wounds, she enjoys nothing more
i love this... im feelin like this now! xx

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:heart: :strip: :heart:
Thanks for the comment. It nice to hear I'm not quite like all the rest.

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
Hopefully you and I can get out of feeling this way, eh? Best of luck to you and thanks for the comment.

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
no probably, i like your writing style

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fate is an elegant cold hearted whore, she loves salting my wounds, she enjoys nothing more
very nice, lucky me my gf is "my one" +fav

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Thanks for the comment and the fav.

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! I don't know what else to say other than it's definately getting faved!!

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Smile as my heart breaks
And bleeds on to my soul
Laugh to mask my dead eyes,
They stare from my drowned soul
If you've reacted so strongly to this then it must be good!! Thanks for the favs.

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain

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